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Notes for 15-Jan-2020...

Helping keep Critters afloat, proceeds benefit the Critters Fund Drive from sales of the ebook edition from SFWA Grandmaster Robert Silverberg's...

	THE CRUSADES by Robert Silverberg - $3.99

		ReAnimus Press Store: www.ReAnimus.com/1619
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Beginning in 1095, Christianity and Islam clashed repeatedly over a 200-year period in the Middle East, in the series of wars we call The Crusades. This era saw naked scheming, selfish grabs for power, treachery of all kinds, and horrific battles--and many examples of nobility, heroism, and faith on both sides. 

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Thanks for the donations, folks!  We are 80.9% of the way to the fund drive goal with contributions from 138 donors, leaving about $800 to go.

	(No donations this past week, sad minion face.)  :[

[See http://www.critters.org/donate.php for more information.]


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Woohoo!  Congratulations to...

	- Larry Hodges, who sold his (Critter'd) short story, "Prototype
	Solar System with Strings Attached" to Galaxy's Edge. {Sadly,
	I'm told that my story was the last one Mike Resnick bought
	for Galaxy's Edge before he died. He bought it on Wednesday,
	Jan. 8, and died shortly after midnight that night. They said
	Galaxy's Edge will continue publication, and that they have
	enough material for several issues already as they consider who
	will be the next editor. }


Please report your Woohoo!s via the www.critters.org/telldaworld.ht web page.


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This week's Most Productive Critter award, for 8 critiques (at time
of judging), averaging almost 500 words each, goes to...

	Joel Roosa

To redeem an MPC, visit:  www.critters.org/usempc.ht

Congratulations!  To everyone else -- Crit early and often!

(For an explanation of the MPC award, see the www.critters.org/award.ht page.)

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Recommended Reading...
One of the best writing books - Secrets from the 6-time Best Editor
Hugo Award Master, Ben Bova: THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS 
http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
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This week we have... [get from http://www.critters.org/private/mss.php ]...
                                                 
     Title                      	Author
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Week of 15-Jan-2020 (Crits due 22-Jan-2020):
 SF  Another Sad Report from the Liberation of Earch  Ed Kratz -#28903
 F   Pandora's Unboxing                 Renan Bernardo -#28904
 F   Let Cry the Heathens, Chapter 1    Lyric Gray -#28905
 F   Drip                               [@] Larry Hodges -#28906
 SF  Blood & Power: The Calm Chapter 7  Javier Sobrado -#28907
 F   The Estranged Princess             Daniel Jones -#28908
 F   The Sheenseeker - Chapter 1 _Lindys_  Heather Gaither (Jonni Cling) -#28909
 F   Born for the Road                  Christopher Henderson -#28910
 H   A Line in the Sand                 Jim Keane -#28911
 F   Trey Roberts and the Ancestor's Wish, Chapter 1 of book 2  Lee Magnus -#28912
 SF  The Thoroughly Respectable Career of Adelaide Blunt  Isabel Heynen -#28913

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Recommended books on writing:

THE CRAFT OF WRITING AND SELLING SCIENCE FICTION by Ben Bova
	ReAnimus Press Store: http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
	Amazon: http://Amazon.com/dp/B006MAZPEI

HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS By (Critter member) Robert Qualkinbush
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1184 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007O272ZI

STAYIN' ALIVE - A WRITER'S GUIDE by three-time SFWA President Norman Spinrad
	How things really work in the art and commerce of publishing
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1179 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007SIC4I8

EXPERIMENT PERILOUS: THE 'BUG JACK BARRON' PAPERS by Norman Spinrad
	(A 99cent essay on SF and writing)
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1180 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007MF3MS8
 
Because you might enjoy it... THE VOID CAPTAIN'S TALE by NORMAN SPINRAD
One of Spinrad's best
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1321
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Pieces up for critique in other workshops...

In the lit workshop - http://critique.org/lit :
 L   What We Talk About When We Talk About Enlightenment  Michael Gruver -#28815

In the mystery workshop - http://critique.org/mystery :
 M   Katrina Cut                        Jim Steele -#28848

In the nonfiction workshop - http://critique.org/nonfiction :
 NO  Belief in Proportion to the Evidence, Cha. 7 Without any Loss or Dishonour  Jim Parry -#28884

In the script workshop - http://critique.org/script :
 SC  Loose Lips                         Robert Qualkinbush -#28625

In the kids workshop - http://critique.org/kids :
 YP  Saul T. Unyon: The Short End of a Tall Tale  Michelle Henrie -#28566

In the comics workshop - http://critique.org/comics :
 CG  Magna. logline/ synopsis           Brent Claridge -#28885

In the western workshop - http://critique.org/western :
 W   A Message to Santa Fe, Chap 1-3    Frank Coombs -#25375

In the romance workshop - http://critique.org/romance :
 R   Pack Chapters 1-3                  Anastasia Bromberg -#28384

In the video workshop - http://critique.org/video :
 VS  The Gallery of Henri Beauchamp     Jay DeTalente -#21424

In the music workshop - http://critique.org/music :
 MP  The Shade Riders and Nocturnal Ned song  Beth Zurkowski -#21675

In the photo workshop - http://critique.org/photo :
 PH  Dry Mud and Cinder Cone            Bill Wight -#19627

In the art workshop - http://critique.org/art :
 AH  Art Man, a portrait                Robert J Cleary -#27847

In the website workshop - http://critique.org/website :
 WW  Ax-yZ The Creative Projects Platform  Charles Gull -#27088

In the critters workshop - http://critique.org/critters :
 SF  Another Sad Report from the Liberation of Earch  Ed Kratz -#28903
 F   Pandora's Unboxing                 Renan Bernardo -#28904
 F   Let Cry the Heathens, Chapter 1    Lyric Gray -#28905
 F   Drip                               [@] Larry Hodges -#28906
 SF  Blood & Power: The Calm Chapter 7  Javier Sobrado -#28907
 F   The Estranged Princess             Daniel Jones -#28908
 F   The Sheenseeker - Chapter 1 _Lindys_  Heather Gaither (Jonni Cling) -#28909
 F   Born for the Road                  Christopher Henderson -#28910
 H   A Line in the Sand                 Jim Keane -#28911
 F   Trey Roberts and the Ancestor's Wish, Chapter 1 of book 2  Lee Magnus -#28912
 SF  The Thoroughly Respectable Career of Adelaide Blunt  Isabel Heynen -#28913
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You might also like... THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS by BEN BOVA
Secrets from the 6-time BEST EDITOR Hugo Award Master!
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1144

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Because you might enjoy it... HOT SKY AT MIDNIGHT by ROBERT SILVERBERG
Greed comes home to roost in a future Earth and her colonies, and the renegades look to take over.
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1617

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