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Critter Notices

Critters is 22!

Yes, 22 years ago Critters was born. Wow! Thanks so much to all of you, who've made it such a resounding success!

Books from Critters!

Check out Books by Critters for books by your fellow Critterfolk, as well as my list of recommended books for writers.

New Book from a Critter Member

**NOW IN PRINT EDITION TOO!** Awesome new book, HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS, from a Critter member whose unearthed a shard of The Secret to becoming a pro writer. Really good piece of work. "...if you're at all concerned about story openings, you'd be nuts not to read what Qualkinbush has to say." —Wil McCarthy, author of BLOOM and THE COLLAPSIUM

The Sigil Trilogy

If you're looking for an amazing, WOW! science fiction story, check out THE SIGIL TRILOGY. This is — literally — one of the best science fiction novels I've ever read.

P&E Has a New Caretaker!

I'm very happy to announce that P&E has been handed off to a new caretaker! Check out the site for news and such. Hurrah!


I'm being interviewed live on public radio for Critters 20th birthday. For those who want to listen, it's on the 10am (Mountain time) show on Thursday, 11/19/16, on Colorado Public Radio - has streaming on the site or it's 90.1 FM in the Denver area. [Interview is done, you can listen on the site]

Free Web Sites

Free web sites for authors (and others) are available at

ReAnimus Acquires Advent!

ReAnimus Press is pleased to announce the acquisition of the legendary Advent Publishers! Advent is now a subsidiary of ReAnimus Press, and we will continue to publish Advent's titles under the Advent name. Advent was founded in 1956 by Earl Kemp and others, and has published the likes of James Blish, Hal Clement, Robert Heinlein, Damon Knight, E.E. "Doc" Smith, and many others. Advent's high quality titles have won and been finalists for several Hugo Awards, such as The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction and Fantasy and Heinlein's Children. Watch this space for ebook and print editions of all of Advent's current titles!

Network speeding up

I'm switching the connection over to a new, shiny 10X faster network because of all the load. There might be bits of downtime as your boxes learn new addresses and things. Should be brief. Let me know of any prolonged outages you see.

Preditors & Editors Changeover

With the very sad passing of Dave Kuzminski, who ran P&E, I've taken over the P&E duties. Lots of what I hope are improvements; check it out at

Critters Server is Dying has been Replaced

See important details here in my blog. Let me know if you find anything that isn't working right. (Manuscripts are now available for this week, FYI.)

Book Recommendation

THE SIGIL TRILOGY: The universe is dying from within... "Great stuff... Really enjoyed it." — SFWA Grandmaster Michael Moorcock

Announcing ReAnimus Press

If you need help making ebooks from manuscripts or print copies—or finding great stuff to read—look no further! An ebook publisher started by your very own Critter Captain. (And with a 12% Affiliate program.) [More]








Weekly Notes

Notes for 18-Apr-2018...

Dave Truesdale at the eminent review site, Tangent Online, writes that
he needs more reviewers... Many Critterfolk have helped him out in the
past, so it's a good gig to get some visibility in the field.
Qualifications are as listed...

	The usual disclaimers and requirements apply: As a fanzine *Tangent Online*
	offers no pay; we do this for the love of genre and short fiction.
	Prospective reviewers must have a working knowledge of the SF/F field and
	be able to express themselves well in English (if not their first
	language). Reviewers will be expected to review one item a month (or more
	if they have the time and want to), at their choosing.

	For those possibly interested, here is *Tangent Online*'s website:

	Prospects should email the editor at:

Helping the Critters Fund Drive this week are sales of the (Critter member and Hugo-finalist)

	WALLS AND WONDERS by S. R. Algernon - $3.99

		ReAnimus Press Store:
		 (available in both ebook and paperback [$14.99, 323 pages])

	If Hemingway wrote science fiction short stories... Including the Hugo award finalist "Asymmetrical Warfare." S. R. Algernon's science fiction evokes Hemingway's spare style and Philip K. Dick's plots, with stories collected from SF's top markets.


Thanks for the donations, folks!  We are 94% of the way to the fund drive goal with contributions from 109 donors, leaving about $200 to go.
Thanks especially to

	David Hughes
	Mariam Melikadze
	Esther Rosenow
	Bill Leonard
	Terrance Crow

for their recent donations to help keep Critters going. Much appreciated!

[See for more information, including one-time and monthly Patreon-like donation options.]


This week's Most Productive Critter award, for 10 critiques (at time
of judging), averaging almost 500 words each, goes to...

	Brian Blodgett

To redeem an MPC, visit:

Congratulations!  To everyone else -- Crit early and often!

(For an explanation of the MPC award, see the page.)


Recommended Reading...
One of the best writing books - Secrets from the 6-time Best Editor
Critters Workshop

This week we have... [get from ]...
     Title                      	Author
Week of 18-Apr-2018 (Crits due 25-Apr-2018):
 F   Comatose                           Darla Jackson -#27603
 F   The Wizards of Llandwellyn, Chapters 22-24  Eric Wilson -#27604
 SF  Fire Elementals                    Pete Koziar -#27605
 SF  Upon the Stair                     Amy Hammack Turner -#27606
 F   The Star of Asterion               Kaitlyn Whipple -#27607
 F   Would You Bet On Sand or Stars?    Renan Bernardo -#27608
 F   Flora and the Lost Child: A Glengarry Tale  Matthew Rettino -#27609
 F   Grayland: When Dreams Come True    Terry Volkirch -#27610
 SF  An Interested God, Chapter 3       Janet LayPort -#27611
 F   Marc Thyme P1                      Bernard Davis -#27612
 SF  Miscalculation                     Alex Villepique -#27613
 SF  Gaia Crossing                      Mariam Melikadze -#27614
 H   Elijah and the Abyss               Dave Riser -#27615
 SF  You Can't Even Call It A Rainbow   Jefferson Retallack -#27616

Recommended books on writing:

	ReAnimus Press Store:


STAYIN' ALIVE - A WRITER'S GUIDE by three-time SFWA President Norman Spinrad
	How things really work in the art and commerce of publishing |

	(A 99cent essay on SF and writing) |
Because you might enjoy it... THE WORLD AND THORINN by DAMON KNIGHT
Thorinn is thrown into a well by his father to appease the rumbling gods... and down he goes!
Pieces up for critique in other workshops...

In the lit workshop - :
 L   My Outlaw Name                     Dave Schultz -#27573
 L   Celebrity crush cruising           Seth A Hampton -#27574

In the mystery workshop - :
 T   The Man Next Door, Chapters 3 and half of 4  Michelle Godard-Richer -#27492

In the nonfiction workshop - :
 NT  The Significance of the Fronting of the Prepositional Phrase in the Text of Genesis 01 01  Rebecca Miller -#26818

In the script workshop - :
 SC  The Happiness of Chez Feliz        Jerry Sexton -#27163

In the kids workshop - :
 YP  The useless shrew                  diana aleksandrova -#27554

In the comics workshop - :
 CG  Metropolise, Chapter 1             Carina Mchardy -#26473

In the western workshop - :
 W   A Message to Santa Fe, Chap 1-3    Frank Coombs -#25375

In the romance workshop - :
 R   Blurred Lines Part Two             Michelle Richer -#27476

In the video workshop - :
 VS  The Gallery of Henri Beauchamp     Jay DeTalente -#21424

In the music workshop - :
 MP  The Shade Riders and Nocturnal Ned song  Beth Zurkowski -#21675

In the photo workshop - :
 PH  Dry Mud and Cinder Cone            Bill Wight -#19627

In the art workshop - :
 AI  The Dark Jester in an Archway      Joy Landa -#25620

In the website workshop - :
 WW  Ax-yZ The Creative Projects Platform  Charles Gull -#27088

In the critters workshop - :
 F   Comatose                           Darla Jackson -#27603
 F   The Wizards of Llandwellyn, Chapters 22-24  Eric Wilson -#27604
 SF  Fire Elementals                    Pete Koziar -#27605
 SF  Upon the Stair                     Amy Hammack Turner -#27606
 F   The Star of Asterion               Kaitlyn Whipple -#27607
 F   Would You Bet On Sand or Stars?    Renan Bernardo -#27608
 F   Flora and the Lost Child: A Glengarry Tale  Matthew Rettino -#27609
 F   Grayland: When Dreams Come True    Terry Volkirch -#27610
 SF  An Interested God, Chapter 3       Janet LayPort -#27611
 F   Marc Thyme P1                      Bernard Davis -#27612
 SF  Miscalculation                     Alex Villepique -#27613
 SF  Gaia Crossing                      Mariam Melikadze -#27614
 H   Elijah and the Abyss               Dave Riser -#27615
 SF  You Can't Even Call It A Rainbow   Jefferson Retallack -#27616

You might also like... ORION IN THE DYING TIME by BEN BOVA
Orion squares off against the dinosaurs to save the very fabric of spacetime

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can't get email to you.)  Check the format of your story ASAP to make sure
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Because you might enjoy it... MAXWELL'S DEMONS by BEN BOVA

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